Monday 31 March 2014

2nd Draft


Self Improvements

  • Lip syncing 
  • Needs to be exported in a higher quality.


This is my second draft of my  music video, below is the video feedback I conducted after my target audience had watched it.

Sunday 2 March 2014

Original Images Taken for my Ancillary texts




Test Shot 




This is the area, where I took some of the shots, I like the mise en scene of blossom as it contrasted with the costume that my artist wore. I also think by editing this image, I may be able to use it for the CD 


Extreme Long Shot of costume 


Long shot of costume - I chose the use of a leotard and kimono as it reflects "Laura Mulveys" Theory of The Male Gaze. I chose black clothing and black lipstick to connote the theme of the music video which is a break up. Therefore the black connotes the death of romance/love. 


I use the gems around the eyes and glittery eye shadow to convey the pop genre. which is eccentric on costume and stage design. 


I dislike this photo due to the lightening. 


I like the photo because of the way my artists hair sweeps across her face and how she looks into the distance connoting a lost look. 


I don't like this image because some hair has covered the artists face. 


I like the lighting in this image, however because my artist has her eyes closed, I'm not sure if I would use this. 


I dislike this image because once again her hair has blown into her face. 


I wouldn't use this image because I don't think it's an appropriate shot because my artist looks expressionless 


I like this image because of the way the lighting is caught and the mise en scene of the background. I also like the voluminous hair of my artist. - I may use this one. 


I quite like this image, and how the artists uses the blossom as a prop however I'm quite sure if it conveys more of a heavy metal/alternative genre as the image looks quite haunting and scary because the artist is staring directing into the camera it gives an almost threatening representation . 


I like this image. 




I quite like this image however a strand of her hair has blown onto her face, so I wouldn't use this


I like how the artist is stood on a side here, I may use this as track cover 


I don't like this image as a close mid shot


I don't like this image either due to the shot length.



I wouldn't use this as my artist blinked. 


I don't like this image. 


I quite like this image because my artist gives of quite a sexy look - conveying  pop.


I like this image too. 


I'm unsure about this image because her hair has blown in front of my artists face. 



I moved further down the track I was on a changed location, to contrast against the nature theme. 
As my artist blinked I wouldn't use this image.


This image may work as CD artwork when Photoshopped and maybe blurred with an other 


I don't like the lightening in this image


I don't like the lightening in this image either. 


I don't like this lighting in this image either


This image has slightly more exposure to the other and I may use this one. 


I don't like this image.



I quite like how the light captures this image, however I'm not sure about the long shot.


I think the mid shot is better, however the artists hand looks odd. 


I like the mid shot and how the like catches in the corner and brings out the gems on my artists eyes, I may use this. 


I don't like this.


I don't like this image either.




I think these two images look to sweet and innocent and doesn't convey the theme I am aiming for.


I don't like the framing of this image


I like this image, however I would have to Photoshop the piece of hair out before using it.


I like this image, even though the hair has blown in her face, I like the angle of the arms and It may work for a album cover or the back of the album.


I like the windswept look in this image


I also like the lighting and windswept look in this image


I quite like this image, I may use it for the poster. 


I don't like the angle in this image


I quite like this image and may use it for the inside of the digipak


I think this image is quite boring 



I like this image, although it would need rotating 


I also like the way the artist has posed in this image


I don't like the pole in this image


I may use this image for the poster